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Scène 1 — Dans la gare oubliée de Port-Comète, Nour répare les robots avec Bip, son fidèle compagnon rouillé.

Nour sits cross-legged on the floor of Port-Comète station, repairing a dismantled robot with a small tool in her hand. Bip, a small rusty one-wheeled robot, stands nearby beside a small pile of bolts. The abandoned station hall stretches vast and dim around them, with dusty platforms and silent tracks visible in the background. Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Setting: gare de Port-Comète: A vast abandoned train station hall with high vaulted ceilings, cracked tiled floors, dusty empty platforms, rusted train tracks, broken overhead lamps, and tall arched windows letting in dim pale light. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

Scène 2 — Une locomotive d'argent, sans conducteur, entra silencieusement en gare. Son panneau annonçait : Terminus, la Lune.

At night, a driverless silver locomotive rolls into a vast abandoned station, its headlight cutting through the darkness. A glowing destination panel is mounted on the front of the sleek train. Nour and Bip stand in the foreground, small silhouettes facing the enormous machine, frozen in surprise. Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Setting: gare de Port-Comète: A vast abandoned train station hall with high vaulted ceilings, cracked tiled floors, dusty empty platforms, rusted train tracks, broken overhead lamps, and tall arched windows letting in dim pale light. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

Scène 3 — Par la vitre, la Terre n'était plus qu'une bille bleue.

Inside a silver train carriage with plain riveted metal walls, Nour, one girl only, stands beside Bip, both seen from the side, looking out through one large round window at the Earth, a small blue marble among the stars. Soft light from the window on their faces Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

Scène 4 — Le moteur toussa. Il manquait un boulon, un seul.

Inside the silver locomotive's engine compartment, Nour kneels and peers into an open mechanical hatch, holding a small wrench, examining an empty hole where a single bolt is missing. Bip stands beside her on his single wheel, tilting curiously. Plain riveted metal walls. Through a round window, stars fill the dark sky outside Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Setting: le train d'argent: A sleek silver train with a streamlined locomotive, rounded riveted metal walls, large circular windows, soft interior lighting, a smooth rounded nose with two round headlights. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

Scène 5 — Bip offre son plus beau boulon. Le moteur repart dans une gerbe d'étincelles.

Inside a metal engine room with plain riveted walls. Bip, in the centre of the image, proudly holds up one shiny bolt in his small pincer arm, a small open metal box full of bolts at his wheel. Nour kneels at the left, laughing, reaching out her hand for the bolt. On the right wall, an open round engine hatch shoots out bright golden sparks. A single girl and a single robot in the scene. Stars visible through a round porthole Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

Scène 6 — Sur le quai lunaire, Nour et Bip regardent la Terre se lever.

Nour and Bip stand on a small white lunar station platform, watching a large blue Earth rising over the grey lunar horizon. Bip bends down and picks up a shiny bolt from the pale ground with his pincer arm while Nour watches him, smiling. The silver train rests behind them at the platform, silent under a black starry sky Characters: Nour: A 12-year-old girl with short dark brown hair, olive skin, brown eyes, wearing a faded orange coverall with grease smudges and a pair of protective goggles pushed up on her forehead. Bip: A small boxy rusty robot with a single rubber wheel, two round glowing amber eyes on its front panel, a small pincer arm, and a dented metal body covered in orange-brown rust spots. Setting: le train d'argent: A sleek silver train with a streamlined locomotive, rounded riveted metal walls, large circular windows, soft interior lighting, a smooth rounded nose with two round headlights. la gare lunaire: A small white station building with a curved domed roof and a simple platform, surrounded by flat grey lunar ground, minimalist architecture with a single round window and a low archway entrance. Style: Modern 3D animated feature film render, rounded cartoon shapes, soft global illumination, warm saturated palette, glossy materials, polished detail. No text, no letters, no watermark, no speech bubbles.

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